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Maker's Monday

Trying out a new weekly thread idea.

This would be a thread for anyone working on personal projects to share their progress, and hold themselves somewhat accountable to a group of peers. We can coordinate weekly standup type meetings if their is interest.

@ArjinFerman, @Turniper, and myself all had some initial interest.

Post your project, your progress from last week, and what you hope to accomplish this week.

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Generally, well written. But you make the common new writer's mistake of overusing adverbs and adjectives. Go through every sentence and remove all adverbs and adjectives and see if it loses anything. (I don't mean you should remove every one from your story - but you could remove a lot and you'd be surprised how many really don't add much.)